Help the writer see what works and what could improve.
The idea
Identify a specific strength, then suggest a concrete change politely and explain its benefit.
Examples
- Your introduction makes the purpose clear.
- The chart helps readers compare the results.
- Your examples make the proposal easy to follow.
- Could you explain how you chose the sample?
- Adding a date to the chart would make it clearer.
- You might shorten the final paragraph to emphasise your conclusion.
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Watch out
Avoid vague criticism such as This is bad: it gives the writer no useful next step.
Try it yourself
Complete the sentence: Your diagram is clear; could you ___ the labels? (enlarge / delete)
Show answer or example answer
enlarge
enlarge suggests a practical change that makes the labels easier to read.
Complete the sentence: The argument is strong. You might ___ a source for the figure. (add / hide)
Show answer or example answer
add
add asks for evidence behind the figure.
Complete the sentence: Could you explain the second step in more ___? (detail / silence)
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detail
detail requests a fuller explanation of the step.
Practice round
Answer questions and rebuild English sentences to practise. Your score is shown.
Complete the sentence: Your diagram is clear; could you ___ the labels? (enlarge / delete)
Complete the sentence: The argument is strong. You might ___ a source for the figure. (add / hide)
Complete the sentence: Could you explain the second step in more ___? (detail / silence)
Tap the words in the right order.
Tap the words in the right order.
Tap the words in the right order.
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Write feedback on a draft, naming one strength and suggesting one specific improvement.